You have the beat, but the choirs sound, in my opinion, really awkward. They lead doesn't fit the choirs either. 3:19 and on for a while sounds like it has great potential. The bass is too loud and overtaking, but the lead sounds promising yet not mastered fine. Thereafter you add something like guitar, doesn't fit really either.
The drops and fades sound very smooth, the beat is fine. I dislike your selection of lead sounds and the choir sounds non fitting except for at the ending. Needs mastering, needs change of sounds, but it sounds like you have talent. I'd like to see your songs in a year or so. This sounds VERY promising at least.