Unique and extremely catchy.
Sounds like something between breakstep/dubsteb/techno/dnb.
I fear 1 thing tho, this might get really repetive in a longer/full version. Anyways, very impressive preview, I'll surely look back a few times to see if your done with the full version!
Keep it up, 5/5
I fear that in every track I make.
Although i will surely contact you when the final is up somewhere. if you add me to ur favorites or like my facebook, i can contact you easier =]
Thanks for the kind words!
Unique style you got thar.
It's most definitely not what I would like usually, but I'm glad to hear there're still very original pieces out here except for the mainstream techno/trance.
This is quality stuff, while at the sametime unique. Keep it up!
Thank you very much =D
Listened for 20 seconds, heard your soundpack and beat/buildup rated 5.
Was totally worth it, got more epic since it was kinda progressive. At 1:40 and on I love that guitar/bass thing you used there. The melodie is very very good, catchy not repetive. Used many different sounds and they all fit together meanwhile being high quality aswell.
Sir you deserve your 5/5. This is epic
Thanks, I think I'm improving with every piece, so expect more like this now I'm getting onto the cooler characters.
Very creative lead, very promising idea. It's catchy yet too repetive, and the beat gets on my nerves after a while. It sounds like it also goes.... too slow.
I'll give you an example of things you COULDVE mastered better: at 2:11 or something the key stops too awkwardly, its an ear for detail, but I would add something like delay. The entire song itself is not as exciting as what you could've done with it either. The lead is very good and not repetive, the swap between the sortof violin and piano is good aswell.
The switch between rock and the regular beat is meh. The organ sounds good.
It's just like... It couldve been better if you wouldve given it more speed and more going on.
Thank you for your very honest and detailed review! Feel free to review other pieces of mine, as you are very exact about everything you point out and it is quite helpful :)
You have the beat, but the choirs sound, in my opinion, really awkward. They lead doesn't fit the choirs either. 3:19 and on for a while sounds like it has great potential. The bass is too loud and overtaking, but the lead sounds promising yet not mastered fine. Thereafter you add something like guitar, doesn't fit really either.
The drops and fades sound very smooth, the beat is fine. I dislike your selection of lead sounds and the choir sounds non fitting except for at the ending. Needs mastering, needs change of sounds, but it sounds like you have talent. I'd like to see your songs in a year or so. This sounds VERY promising at least.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what I can do about it.
Catchy but causes headaches. Your lead is SUPER sharp, and when your tired like I am it just hurts lol.
The melodie is supercatchy though, keep it up!
I found the problem, will re-up asap thank you for listening and pointing that out to me.
I think this of great quality. I personally don't like dubsteb at all, but this drop is badass.
I would give this a 3/5 cos I don't like dubsteb. But I gave it a 5/5 since I think it's really well done!
Keep it up
Thanks :)
Sounds good to me but the soundpack sounds kinda cheap. Nor is the lead really fitting.
However very nice melodie and fitting bass.
5/5
8/10
Yea, I'm having to use GarageBand for I cannot find any other good music making programs on a Mac OSX!! haha so yea, I have to use the given instruments and vocal effects that I kinda agree they don't sound the best but aha cant find any other! ^.^ Thanks fer the review!
Happy dance, blergh not my style lol.
The lead is solid and clear, however the vocals are pretty mehhhh. I would add more depth to the vocals, by for example making it more 'wet'(yep sounds wrong inorite). Also a little too repetive for me, would not be repetive if you like fading stuff tho.
Very well done, but needs work.
Thank you for taking the time to review it c: I will definitely consider what you've said.
Fairly good
Sure I'll review yours lol.
Few little things I noticed tho:
>0:27 is after the drop, you use a faded sound in the back there, which doesn't really sounds 'statisfying', it's close to it, but it's not as I would wanted it to be.
And, the overlapping sound, you double the melodie with a new sample, from >1:00 and on, sounds pretty unfitting to me.
On the other hand, I defenitely like the melodie and the drops are just great.
Keep 'em coming!
ok thanks i now i need to edit it som more
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